What do you mean by speaking “lewdly”? Do you know what this word means? It is important that you look it up.
How is the following information relevant to the now what section? It reads like WHAT happened but not a reflection of how it may or may not change your actions, attitudes, or condition in the future.
As we enter the Capital of Virginia we were following a person to hear from him some information about the place, government rules, president, history, and the building. After we looking around the building and hear some information about everything for that building the person left us in the lower’s room, to do our speaking practice with feeling of the positions like we were those people.
What?
My classmate and I had trip to the Capital of Virginia. We went there by the bus. It was the firs time for me to try the vcu bus. The place was in downtown. After we arrived into that area we were walking to go to the place that we needed. As we walked we enjoyed watching the…