Traveling in a group led by a tour guide, or traveling independently
AS SUNG POINTED OUT, THE SHARING OF INFORMATION IS ALSO A GREAT POINT. YOU COULD INCLUDE THIS AS A NEW PARAGRAPH OR IN PARAGRAPH 1. YOU COULD EXPAND THE IDEA MORE BY DISCUSSING THE HISTORY THAT YOU COULD LEARN FROM THE TOUR GUIDE. ALSO, YOU COULD INCLUDE A POINT ABOUT CONVENIENCE IN THE 3RD PARAGRAPH. YOU SAVE BOTH MONEY AND TIME SINCE YOU DON’T HAVE TO FIGURE OUT HOW YOU ARE GOING TO GET FROM ONE PLACE TO ANOTHER.
Some people say that for most people, the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. I agree with this opinion.
1. People will enjoy the companionship when they are traveling in a group. A group touring tends to have many members. These people travel together eat together and stay in the same accommodation. During the trip, they can make a new relationship and they will never feel lonely.
2. People will enjoy the comfort and safety of group travel. Sometimes, traveling alone may face with dangerous situations. This might be because that people tend to have insufficient information about the touring places. However, a guide has a lot of information including places and he/she can give some useful tips.
3. When people travel in a group, they can save the cost. Because there are a lot of places discounted when people are in a group. Therefore, people may be able to enjoy an economical trip.
I agree with his idea. 3 reason are good. also, if people travel in a group, they can share their information. ^^
