Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Other like to be with friends mostof the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?
YOU CLEARLY HAVE THREE POINTS BUT I WONDER HOW YOU WILL DEVELOP YOUR IDEA ON LONELINESS. THE SECOND SENTENCE UNDER POINT 1 DOESN’T SEEM TO RELATE TO LONELINESS IN PARTICULAR. WHY IS IT PARTICULARLY IMPORTANT NOT TO FEEL LONELY? YOU COULD ARGUE THAT LONELINESS CAN LEAD TO DEPRESSION OR YOU COULD TALK ABOUT HOW HUMANS ARE SOCIAL ANIMALS (AND THAT PEOPLE WHO ARE AROUND OTHER PEOPLE TEND TO LIVE LONGER THAN THOSE WHO ARE ALONE.)
Thesis : I prefer to spen most of my time with friends because keep me frome feeling lonely, it is enjoyable to talk with, friends teach me new things.
1. Friends keep me from feeling lonely. if i want to do something, i invite a friend or friends and we do it together.
2. I like talking wiht my friends. if l have a problem, i talk it over with my friends and they help me solve.
3. I learn a lot from my friends. I can learn many new things and interesting things by sharing with my friends.
